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Feedback

After having viewed our thrillers ourselves, we all watched each other's thrillers and got feedback from our peers and also two professionals involved in the media industry. We got lots of positive feedback from them including:

• The theme of the eyess was very effective and intense.
• It had a good plot.
• The effects were very good.

We also got feedback about what we could do to improve our thriller. This included:

• Adding a diary scene to the sequence to emphasize Lucifer's obsession with Lily.
• Correct it by getting rid of accidental black blank scenes.

We took all feedback on board and made changes by addressing the recommended improvements. The diary scene definately emphasizes a stalkers obsession and makes it more creepy.

Storyboards

These are the storyboards we originally had, but we changed our plot for our actual opening sequence to make it more thrilling and creepy.

Dangerous Desire