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Feedback

After having viewed our thrillers ourselves, we all watched each other's thrillers and got feedback from our peers and also two professionals involved in the media industry. We got lots of positive feedback from them including:

• The theme of the eyess was very effective and intense.
• It had a good plot.
• The effects were very good.

We also got feedback about what we could do to improve our thriller. This included:

• Adding a diary scene to the sequence to emphasize Lucifer's obsession with Lily.
• Correct it by getting rid of accidental black blank scenes.

We took all feedback on board and made changes by addressing the recommended improvements. The diary scene definately emphasizes a stalkers obsession and makes it more creepy.

Storyboards

These are the storyboards we originally had, but we changed our plot for our actual opening sequence to make it more thrilling and creepy.

Dangerous Desire

Feedback on Film poster

We have got fairly good feedback for our film poster, mainly from people who have seen the film and understand that the characters eyes are a reoccurring theme in the piece. We also got good feedback on how professional the poster looked because we had included the name of our production company, along with details of who had played what role at the bottom of the poster and a quote from critics and these are all features that you would expect to see on every film poster.

Posted by Chloe Barnham

Group Meeting 4

Since our last meeting we have had a re-shoot and have made the appropriate changes to the opening. We have also edited the film together and produced a soundtrack. A poster has also been created. We have decided now that we need to gather some feedback for the poster and then evaluate the project separately on our own blogs.

Posted by Chloe Barnham